
I have always fiddled with putting poems to music. The very first homemade album I made back in 1972 had a version of the old poem “Lord Lovel,” which probably has a real melody out there somewhere but I found it in a poetry book. Come to think of it, I have a pretty funky song using Longfellow’s “Excelsior” that I have never recorded … hmmm.
So it’s not surprising that I might borrow some lyrics from Elizabeth Barrett Browning. I did commit the sacrilege of changing “thee” to “you” throughout my adaptation of the immortal Sonnet 43.
I arranged the words into verses on Jan. 24, and then decided on a rather standard G-Em-C-D chord progression on Jan. 25. I recorded the song on Feb. 3 and tweaked it into this form six days later. If I say so myself, I’m getting better at crafting three-part harmony.
I experimented with song order a lot before settling on the track list that appears in the released album, but “When She Smiles” always came right after “How Do I Love You.” In fact, until the very last minute these two songs opened the album. I ultimately decided the set works best if the album title is the first words you hear.
I wrote “When She Smiles” Jan. 14 and 15, and the song is unabashedly about my sweetheart, Mary. I had the rhythm first even before the melody or the words — my mind was hearkening back to Jimmy Gilmer’s 1962 song “Sugar Shack” — “There’s a crazy little shack beyond the tracks, and everybody calls it the Sugar Shack” — when I wrote, “There’s a cute little mama living down the street, and let me tell you, buddy, she is kind of sweet.”
(Yikes, now that I listen side-by-side, I wonder if I need to add K. McCormack and F. Voss to the writing credits. Is this how George Harrison felt when he gave another listen to “He’s So Fine”?)
This is not hyperbole: Sometimes when Mary smiles, my heart melts. She has that effect on me. I put “How Do I Love Thee” to music about a week after writing “When She Smiles” specifically thinking Browning’s poem would make a good introduction to my sweet little mama.
Here’s a link to clips from Crimson Sky on New Year’s Morn with further links to your favorite streaming services, or you can just go to Spotify or Apple Music or YouTube, or wherever you usually stream music, and do a search for “Bluhm Crimson Sky” — and thanks for listening!

